Thanks for sharing this Brent!
Not sure if this will be helpful or not, but I offer this anyway. I’ve often challenged my entrepreneurs to practice story telling around their canvas. Pick any 3 boxes at a time, and tell a story around just those 3 boxes. You are likely to notice some gaps when trying to tell the story this way. Then pick a different combination of 3 boxes and tell a story around those. You will sharpen your story telling skills and zero in quickly on gaps you need to tighten up in some way. Make sure the person you are working with knows its ok to poke holes in your story and ask tough questions!
If you try this, let me know how it goes 🙂